WALT: use the correct structure for a recount.
Success Criteria:
- I will have a title
- I will have an orientation (who, What, Where, when,
- how)
- I will use sequence words (first next after then finally
- shortly)
- I talked About how I felt.
25/4/2019
At The Whangarei Wave pools.
On the 25th of April 2019 my family and
I went to the Anzac Parade, we also went to
Whangarei wave pools for my nephews 5th Birthday.
We went on our car. When we got to the wave pools
I was so excited.
I went to the Anzac Parade, we also went to
Whangarei wave pools for my nephews 5th Birthday.
We went on our car. When we got to the wave pools
I was so excited.
So the first thing I had to do was go inside to pay the
lady so I ran to pay the lady.
lady so I ran to pay the lady.
After that I ran to the girls changing room to get
changed. I was just wearing a t-shirt and shorts.
When I had finished getting changed
I went to the pool to have a swim.
When I got to the water I saw Amira
and Te-Hanah and all of my cousins. Amira
was going down the hydro slide and Te-Hanah was
swimming around the pool, when I started swimming
around I saw some of my cousins swimming and some
of my cousins sitting outside on the grass.
changed. I was just wearing a t-shirt and shorts.
When I had finished getting changed
I went to the pool to have a swim.
When I got to the water I saw Amira
and Te-Hanah and all of my cousins. Amira
was going down the hydro slide and Te-Hanah was
swimming around the pool, when I started swimming
around I saw some of my cousins swimming and some
of my cousins sitting outside on the grass.
After that I started diving around the water.
Later on me and Huhana went down the hydro slide.
We were waiting in the really long line she went down
the light one and I went down the dark one it was fun.!
We were waiting in the really long line she went down
the light one and I went down the dark one it was fun.!
Next I went in to the spa it was so warm when
I got out of the spa I went to outside to run around.
I got out of the spa I went to outside to run around.
After that I went inside and walked straight to the
cold pool when I got to the water I walked deeper
and then they turnt the waves on. It was so much fun!
cold pool when I got to the water I walked deeper
and then they turnt the waves on. It was so much fun!
Eventually me and Te-Hanah went down the hydroslide
it was so much fun. Later on my cousin came and told
us that “it is kai time” so we jumped out of the pool
and wrapped our towels around ourselves.
And then we had a kai, after we had some kai and
some cake we had to wait 5 minutes and then we
went for a swim while I was swimming some of my
cousins and their kids left.
it was so much fun. Later on my cousin came and told
us that “it is kai time” so we jumped out of the pool
and wrapped our towels around ourselves.
And then we had a kai, after we had some kai and
some cake we had to wait 5 minutes and then we
went for a swim while I was swimming some of my
cousins and their kids left.
Finally my family and I went to get changed and went home.
I had a wonderful day at the Whangarei wave pools.
I have achieved my WALT.
Hi my name is Isabella-Paige and I am a student from Paihia School and I am In Te Ngahere I like your blog post about Whangarei Wave pools. I like the part you explained where when & why. What kinda cake did you have, when I started to read your story and saw the word cake it made me want to have some. I noticed that you said I started diving around in the water you can say I started diving in the water.But other then that you did good maybe you can check my blog out http://psisabella-paigef.blogspot.com
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