Kia, ora Sally I liked your story it had good punctuation and vocabulary But just some words like the names you didn't put capital letters on but the rest made sense because I did something similar to that, and nice name you thought of for the dream giver. Blog you later
Kia, ora Sally I liked your story it had good punctuation and vocabulary But just some words like the names you didn't put capital letters on but the rest made sense because I did something similar to that, and nice name you thought of for the dream giver. Blog you later
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