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16/10/09
At Wellington pools.
Yahoo! On a lovely Thursday morning my Dad, my Sister and I went to the Wellington pools. When we got there the first thing I did was I ran to the changing room to put my swimming togs on. Next I ran to the shallow end of the pool and dived into the water. While I was under the water I saw lots of people’s legs and I saw people swimming around. And then suddenly I heard my name. It was my sister calling me. She was saying, “Sally, Sally, Sally come.” I came out of the water and said, “Ok then.” I went to see what she wanted. She said, “Where were you?”
I said, “I was diving under water and looking around.”
She said, “Ok.” After that we started to play master. There was even a hoop as big as an elephant. It was fun playing master. Next we went on the hydroslide. The hydroslide was huge. I loved going down the hydroslide. It was funny. My sister kept making us stuck because she was scared to go down so I thought to myself, “I'm going to go by myself.” Then suddenly my sister came down as fast as a race car. Later on I went back into the pool. It was outstanding on the hydroslide. Shortly after my dad said, “Let's go and get some lunch.” Me and my sister said, “Ok then.” Then we went to get some lunch. Eventually we went home and while my dad was driving us home I said, to my dad, “Dad that was the best day ever. Thank You for taking me there.” Finally went home. I loved it at the Wellington pools.
